Commentary Template

News Commentary Script Template

A retention-optimized script template for YouTube news commentary videos. Copy it, customize the placeholders, and start writing.

[CLAIM FIRST - 0:00 to 0:20 | about 60 words]
State your conclusion in one sentence, before any context.
"[WHAT I THINK HAPPENED], and here is the part most coverage is skipping."
Name the story and the date on screen so the video stays datable.

[WHAT ACTUALLY HAPPENED - 0:20 to 1:30 | about 272 words]
Give the plainest possible account of the facts, with no opinion in it at all.
"Here is what the report says, in its own words."
Put the original source on screen: headline, date, and outlet.

[WHY I READ IT THAT WAY - 1:30 to 4:00 | about 453 words]
"The reason this is bigger than it looks: [MECHANISM OR PRECEDENT]."
Walk the inference in visible steps, one sentence each.
"Step one: [FACT]. Step two: [INFERENCE]. Step three: [WHAT FOLLOWS]."

[THE STRONGEST OBJECTION - 4:00 to 6:00 | about 362 words]
"Here is the best argument against me: [STRONGEST OPPOSING CASE]."
Take it seriously for two sentences before you answer it.
"If that is right, then [WHAT WOULD HAVE TO BE TRUE]."

[WHERE I COULD BE WRONG - 6:00 to 7:30 | about 272 words]
Name the specific thing that would change your mind.
"If [SPECIFIC EVENT] happens, I am wrong about this, and I will say so on this channel."
"Here is what I do not know yet: [OPEN QUESTION]."

[WHAT TO WATCH NEXT - 7:30 to 9:00 | about 272 words]
"Three things to watch over the next [PERIOD]: [SIGNAL ONE], [SIGNAL TWO], [SIGNAL THREE]."
Keep them checkable, so the viewer can hold you to them.

[CLOSE - 9:00 to 10:00 | about 181 words]
Restate the claim in one sentence, then hand the floor over.
"Tell me in the comments where the inference breaks for you. I read those."

Common Mistakes to Avoid

Recapping the news for the first two minutes before saying anything, which is what every other outlet already did.

Mixing facts and opinion in the same breath, so a viewer cannot tell which parts are reported and which parts are yours.

Answering a weak version of the opposing case, which makes the argument look like it needs protection.

Making a claim you will never revisit, instead of naming the evidence that would change your mind.

Planning numbers

About 1,810 words

Script length that fills 10 minutes

0:00 to 0:20

Opening block to write first

181 wpm (median for 8 to 12 minute videos)

Words per minute of finished video

Frequently Asked Questions

Should I state my opinion at the start of a commentary video?

Yes, in one sentence. Commentary viewers come for your read of the story, and a video that recaps first and opines later is competing with every news outlet on the part of the job you are least needed for.

How long should a commentary video be?

Most commentary works between 8 and 15 minutes: long enough for the facts, the reasoning, and a real objection. A 10 minute video is about 1,810 words of narration. If the story has no objection worth answering, it is a post, not a video.

How do I comment on news without spreading misinformation?

Quote the primary source on screen, keep the fact section free of interpretation, label your inferences as inferences, and state what you could not verify. If you later find you were wrong, name the specific thing that changed and correct it on the channel.

How do I handle a story that develops after I publish?

Name checkable signals in the video so a follow up can confirm or deny them, and put the story date on screen. That way the video stays honest about when it was made rather than aging into a false claim.

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