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onca · @onca_yt
Words
243
Runtime
1:01
Speaking pace
239wpm
Reading time
1min
239 words per minute, above the 201 75th percentile of 349 measured videos. That distribution comes from the 349-video hook study.
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A 15-year-old boy told his mother he was joining the war. Terrified she would lose him, she begged him to stay, but he had already made up his mind. Furious and heartbroken, she slapped him across the face and shouted, >> "If you leave, never come back." >> Before sunrise the next morning, he quietly packed his things. While his mother was still asleep, he knelt outside her door to say one final goodbye, then quietly left. Every day she sat beneath the tree beside their gate, staring down the road and waiting for her son to appear, but he never did. Then, 71 years later, an 86-year-old veteran finally returned to the village looking for his childhood home. As
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Sentence shape
| Measure | This transcript |
|---|---|
| Sentences | 16 |
| Average words per sentence | 15.2 |
| Longest sentence | 25 words |
| Questions asked | 1 |
| Sentences containing a number | 5 |
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A 15-year-old boy told his mother he was joining the war. Terrified she would lose him, she begged him to stay, but he had already made up his mind. Furious and heartbroken, she slapped him across the face and shouted, >> "If you leave, never come back." >> Before sunrise the next morning, he quietly packed his things. While his mother was still asleep, he knelt outside her door to say one final goodbye, then quietly left.
Every day she sat beneath the tree beside their gate, staring down the road and waiting for her son to appear, but he never did. Then, 71 years later, an 86-year-old veteran finally returned to the village looking for his childhood home. As he walked down the road, he noticed an extremely old woman sitting alone beneath a tree. He almost walked past her, but then he recognized the tree. It was the same tree outside his childhood home.
He slowly stepped closer and realized the woman sitting beneath it was his mother, now 106 years old. He rushed toward her, dropped to his knees, and began apologizing through tears. She slowly raised her trembling hand and touched the same [music] cheek she had slapped 71 years earlier. Then she whispered, >> "Does it still hurt?" >> Holding back tears, her son answered, >> "Not anymore, Mother." >> And after waiting 71 years to see her son one [music] last time, she finally closed her eyes.
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